You are studying in a large town where there are no leisure facilities for young people. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
Describe the problem
Make some suggestions for leisure facilities
Say why you think that these facilities will make the town a better place.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to suggest that the local authorities should construct a leisure complex where children will be able to play sports and meet up.
In our community, the youth find difficulty engaging in regular exercise or playing sports due to no leisure centre in the neighborhood. Therefore, a study conducted by a local university in 2017 showed that more than 50% of students in our town faced health problems and low endurance.
I would like to make a suggestion that the council should fund for leisure facilities in the near future, such as a swimming pool or a basketball ground. I think that the buildings should be located next public schools and the central park in the downtown.
This would encourage adolescents to do exercise and take part in sports on a regular basis. thus, the community can develop a healthy lifestyle in the teenagers and raise the public awareness about working out regularly.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
Khang Do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...take part in sports on a regular basis. thus, the community can develop a healthy li...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, thus, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95906432749 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6905033957 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678362573099 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0203528299 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20285631907 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629141809946 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671816114707 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956993947129 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610699892491 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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