Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive dvelopment, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">More and more people today consume fast food, which results</span>
</p><p class="MsoNormal">in several health issues. Some people believe that in order to minimize its
consumption, it is the governments responsibility to raise the taxes for such
type of food. In this essay I strongly agree with that opinion, taking into
consideration that government’s role is to organize better life for its
citizens. Higher taxes will affect the price of junk food, it will also reduce
its consumption, thus bringing to better health level of the population.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">It is widely known that one of the main advantages of the</span>
</p><p class="MsoNormal">cenvenience food is its low price. People choose this food not merely because
of its quick preparation, but also cosidering its price. For example, a person
who wishes to lunch somewhere and has a choice betwn Mcdonalds and an Italian
restaurant, will prefer the former due to its cheaper price, while in terms of
food quality it is obvious that the Italian restaurant would win. Therefore,
there is no doubt that if the increase in taxes will bring to higher prices of
fast food, people will choose higher quality food over the faster-made ones.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">Secondly, tax increase will lead to a change in locations of</span>
</p><p class="MsoNormal">fast food, moving them far from the central streets. As a general rule, a huge
portion of the product cost is the price for the rent. Considering the fact
that higher taxes will forse the fast food producers to cut other expenditures,
they will most probably try to minimize the renting costs, moving the business
to cheaper places that, in general, are not on the central streets. On a whole,
this will lead to minizing fast food usage quantity.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal"><o:p style="font-size: 1.1em;"> </o:p><span style="font-size: 1.1em;">To conclude, I believe that as high is the tax on jank food,</span>
</p><p class="MsoNormal">as less it will be eaten by the population, thus resluting in less obesity and
helthier lifestyle.<o:p></o:p></p><p class="MsoNormal">
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Grammar and spelling errors:
^^Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...to minimize its consumption, it is the governments responsibility to raise the taxes for s...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 20, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...eve that as high is the tax on jank food,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in general, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53939393939 5.12529762239 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.44189683978 2.80592935109 230% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.060620616 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.8 106.682146367 202% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0180587932549 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170844243176 0.084324248473 20% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256358961073 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0109830836799 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269413820511 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.24 12.4159519038 171% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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