Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Sudheerkumar Motakatla, a marketing executive from Technosoft Private Limited. Last week I had organized an all-day meeting for our office staff in your hotel. I must admit that, all our company employees were overwhelmed with the hotel ambience and hospitality from support staff was outstanding. However, none of us enjoyed the food served for Lunch. I had received unanimous feedback stating that, the quality of the food was worst.
I agree to the fact that, there were plenty of verity dishes were served but the food was server in cold rather hot. Apart from that, the taste of most of the items was below par, in few dishes the salt was more and in some extra spices were added. Indian breads were so hard for us to cut with the hands. We had specially requested to add few vegetarian dishes and a salad, however we couldn’t find anything in our menu. It was much like; veggies were thrown into the corner. As a result of this, they had go to other restaurant to finish their lunch. Thus, we had to reschedule our post lunch session.
Based on the experience we had, I would like to suggest few improvements you can try. Firstly, you should buy new heating equipment to keep the dishes hot. Secondly, add few vegetarian and vegan dishes in your menu. At last, if possible try to change the head chef.
Yours Faithfully,
Sudheerkumar Motakala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...e corner. As a result of this, they had go to other restaurant to finish their lun...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...e corner. As a result of this, they had go to other restaurant to finish their lun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70781893004 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5293749173 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9803857449 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2941176471 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2941176471 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251570946342 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748163515129 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069139180908 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117941626391 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990324312613 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.