One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?
Many major cities now have to deal with massive traffic congestion. The primary cause of this phenomenon is the increase of private vehicles and the most viable solution is to educate young people about this issue.
The increasing number of owned cars and motorbikes is the main reason behind major gridlocks and traffic jams. This is because there is not enough room for a huge number of vehicles traveling on a street at the same time. This situation is even made worse when the capacity of streets is not expanded to maintain the flow of traffic and everyone loves to sit in their private vehicle for their own convenience. For example, traffic jams in Ho Chi Minh City now occur every day due to the overload of private cars and motorbikes.
A long term solution to this predicament is to educate young people about the consequence of traffic congestion in developed cities. Children in schools could be taught about the delay in daily work and other routines due to gridlocks in big cities. They are then to teach their parents about what they learnt at schools and adults will also be influenced by this initiative. Subsequently, people will be aware to stop driving their own vehicles on the streets for their own sake. For instance, school children in Hanoi were taught that traffic congestion could badly affect their study and many parents now turn to use public transportation to reduce traffic jams in the city.
In conclusion, many metropolia are facing severe gridlocks more frequently because there are too many people want to own and drive their own cars, however, the young should be taught about the negative effects of this problem on their daily lives to tackle it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86505190311 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46778552511 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525951557093 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7395298865 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968085848355 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407128757497 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328309232376 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653089480424 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277436316383 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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