People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world？
Despite the fact that the matter of nature’s role has not grabbed a headline as frequently as other issues in our fast-paced life, it does not mean it is less vital. Individuals often do not pay much attention on the vital of environment. Therefore, the objective of the following essay is to elaborate the force behind this pressing issue and offer constructive approach to cope with it.
We should recognize that there is a wide range of reason why some inhabitants neglect to absorb information about Mother Nature, among which the primary one is that they have more important objects to concern, such as family, social network, or entertainment. For instance, when people busy to work and satisfy their ever-growing appetite, they often feel spending time to discover outdoor subjects is not necessary. As a result, a part of human will have a lack of knowledge about climate changing outside their doors, which mainly contributes to their shortage of nature’s role in society. Another reason to take into account is that education does not complete its job entirely since nowadays young generation is taught more about science and indoor activities than outdoor species. A particular example of this problem is that children from primary to high schools in Vietnam have to focus on a host of profound subjects like mathematics, physic, or chemistry while they neither have chance to observe the pragmatic creations in nature nor been to the agricultural area to learn different types of plant that they only know by theory.
In order to tackle this phenomenon, countless measures have been applied, among which the key one is that schools need to balance between theory and practice. In simple term, if a course is about environment, professors could let students do some research from their living sections prior to lecture day. Another remedy which should be cited to solve this thorny issue is that people need to raise their consideration about what is happening outside their zone. Hence human consciousness is improved; people will understand clearly the importance of the landscapes and other species to our world. Above all else, government should join hand with education by creating nature protection campaign to broaden citizens ‘mind about how vital the Mother Nature is.
The matter of having little detail of nature position has been arousing people around the world’s concern. Actually, these are not the best and only resolutions that we should take; nevertheless, it is noticed that we had better take strong actions to overcome the problem and hopefully things are changing in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18969555035 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73432818641 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594847775176 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8845149637 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.733333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4666666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297106299069 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846206871911 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823100432962 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15453703477 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744663223191 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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