The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summerize the information by selecting
The given flow chart describes how an air balloon is operated in order for it to ascend.
As can be seen, the performance of air balloon requires a multiplex process. There are three stages for the operation of the balloon.
The process begin with mixing propane with cool air through a basket and by the burner in order to make flame, which is the condition constant heat applied for the ascending of the air balloon. The rope has the responsibility to connect the envelope and the basket together.
In the following step, the heat of flame will raise the inner area of envelope in order to maintain the ascending of air balloon. In the top of the air balloon, parachute value which permits hot air to preserved in a controlled rate is a self-sealing. Gores and panels have the task to strengthen the structure of air balloon.
- The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future. 84
- More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 61
- The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summerize the information by selecting 56
- The picture below shows how a hot balloon works Summerize the information by selecting 53
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ir to preserved in a controlled rate is a self-sealing. Gores and panels have the task to stre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65306122449 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64562012481 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.271774556 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110989401173 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573524327649 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03030665064 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783920845222 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295437561425 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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