The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.
It is argued that the job market is developing to fulfill a duty of economy and society for the Industry 4.0. However, workers are facing the challenge of innovation at work. There are two major problems and both of them should be tackled by the authorities.
As employees should change their job or renew their work environment in order to meet the demand of economy, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that the development of technology will eliminate energetic occupations such as sewing or arranging commodity in order to save time and improve the quality of product. For instance, in sewing factories, robotic devices are manufactured will make outstanding contribution to ensure precise seams and take less time , compared to sewing employees. One more reason is that due to the needs of citizen, there are many jobs require abundant labor resources, because of this, all of jobs are unnecessary will be get rid of in order to add the workforce for essential job. For example, software engineers in Vietnam is still a young industry and there are not many employees for doing this job. Hence, the government encourages workers from many labor resources to change their jobs to pay dividends for themselves and economy of country.
There are several actions could take to solve problems described above. One simple solution would be teaching students skills in technology so they can easily orient their careers for later. In fact, in Vietnam, Informatics has been considered an important discipline for students to improve their computer use, and they can easily learn about current technology industries. Furthermore, it is important to orient your career smartly. The senior students of high school will be oriented and learn about the potential career, in order to choose the right job for themselves.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for employees of innovation at work, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve the quality of product. For instance, in sewing factories, robotic devices are...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Ensure precise seams and take less time , compared to sewing employees. One more ...
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Line 2, column 600, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...of citizen, there are many jobs require a abundant labor resources, because of th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08181818182 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73238748126 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.648326085 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.785714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151418498164 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552040306453 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541628713655 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110980914653 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432559209527 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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