The ecozone diagrams illustrate salmon's life as well as the eating habit.
It can be clearly seen that there are three steps to describe the entire life span of salmons. Overall, the living places for salmons are several.
In the beginning, the salmon eggs are planted under the reeds with a lot of wee stone on the upper river, where is a slow moving speed. After five to six months, the fry salmons, around 3 to 8 cm, born and move to the lower river, where is the next place for their growth with a fast flowing to adapt the faster speed.
4 years later, the status of salmons is changed from fry to smelt, grow between 12 to 15 cm. At the moment, salmons are able to survive in the open sea. And finally, they will become adult salmon after 5 years with a 70 to 76cm body length, which is the 10 times with their birth length, as well as they will return to the upper river in order to birth their salmon eggs.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development? 56
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 73
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 73
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21590909091 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93968984485 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.382621436 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104535266864 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522886643317 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341184613249 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754832520333 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363242067347 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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