The given diagram indicates information about how used glass bottles are recycled.
The diagram illustrates a great information about the production of recycled bottles.
Overall, the progress involves 3 main steps beginning with used bottles collection and finishing with selling in supermarkets.
In the first stage, after saving a huge amount of bottles at particular point that customer made use of, these are shipped to a cleaning plant by trucks. Subsequently, it is such a high pressure that water takes accounted for washing the bottles, printed by green, brown or clear prior to transport to a glass factory. Afterwards, before being heated in a furnace and converted to liquid, the bottles are broken down into the number of pieces. Meanwhile, combination between either the recycled or the new liquid glass leads to a new form of bottles in a mould.
At the end of the process, after filling and packaging, these bottles are delivered to supermarkets to be sold.
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- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- Governments should spend money on railways rather roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- The given diagram indicates information about how used glass bottles are recycled. 56
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wn into the number of pieces. Meanwhile, combination between either the recycled ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1156462585 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8557495793 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673469387755 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3394363794 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207987538069 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849268222555 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522298583847 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116343702576 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574869577332 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.