Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are a variety of methods that connect residents closer despite of the difference cultures and ages. From my view, do I believe that music plays a fundamental role to carry out such lucrative function due to some elements.
First and for most, in terms of recreation, kind of music is one of the most common way city dwellers enjoy. Because of the same passion in the world, listeners gradually elucidate their opinions about particular both composers, songs and singers.
Besides, the development of cutting-edge technology encourages them to share a great information in the domain of music. Not only listening to a diversify type of songs, but citizens also introduce which songs they are keen on to their friends that causes to the presence of fan clubs. The most remarkable website is YouTube allowing audiences to either give their comments or show their reputation. Should a singer is extremely famous namely Justin Bieber, Charlie or BTS, the number of discussions will soar dramatically no matter who audiences are and where they come from.
Other reason that I concur with this statement is a range of topics. There are the number of essential subjects which take the responsibility for the motivation of composers namely patriotism, nature and love. It is such a valuable empathy that a participant comprehends while listening even though he is a teenager or adult . Regarding country ideas, Taylor Swift is believed to be one of the most successful singers. Apart from both her beautiful voice and amazing talent, should you type this key word, the list of her productions as well as information will make you impressed. Furthermore, English language is a factor contributing to a wonderful communication among global citizens. It is an intersubstitutable function that not only language barrier is limited but people also comprehend each individual despite of several cultures and ages.
In conclusion, types of music always take accounted for making audiences together whether their ages and diversity cultures besides other ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23939393939 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92769042073 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630303030303 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.536982584 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138491557723 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367767574988 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360903530836 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724548912386 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349590462104 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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