A debate has drawn an increasingly attention by the public today is that whether it is necessary to invest time and money to become a biligual or multyligual speaker, with no need in the aspects of job career or tourism in other countries.From my perspective, the merits of mastering another sort of language do outweigh its drawbacks.
To begin with, a lot of people believe that mastering local words will be helpfui to adapt to the new enviroments and make friends with foreignors , which especialy crutial to both travellers and the ones working aboard. After all , as social animals , it is human nature that they will undoubtely fall in depression in places full of strangers. Besdes , without the ability of communicating , it would have a series of diasters beyond imagination happening to outlanders, if they came across robbery or suffering a disease. Furthermore, understanding foreign languages means a better analysis of local cultrue , facilitating to obtain more joy during a journey or brave any chanllege occured durig a task. Finally, to win the respect from others is always not an easy thing, let alone in a stange country , it is only the fluency and cohere words can break the ice to promote the progresses in daily life and works.
On the other ,however , it is not a pity that foreign language learners fail to, under no appropriate circumstance, display what they have learnt. That is because of the impacts of globalisation is everywhere. All the companies are prone to employ the ones armed with biligual or even multiligual skills to solidify the power of their teams , guaranteeing the ratio of international market. On top of that , It is so common that people purchase some special commodities from internet . The buyers will find it much easier to hunt their ideal ones among the endless choices ,which is an extremely achievement for them.Moreover, when appreciating TV series and movies with non-native voices, these knowleges will definitely play an vital role not in distinguishing the quality of the production , but also provides watchers with a touch of unknown parts of the world, enriching both moral and practical life.Eventually , having the knowledge other languages domonstrates another angle to evaluate one's own socitey, igniting the enthusiasm of innovation. So do the revoltuions in other fields .
In conclution , the benefits brought in wave of learning foreign languages , needless to say, are superior to the neccessity of travelling and working abroad. That is why I commend the importance of it .
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- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 80
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, after all, sort of, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1598062954 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05178754948 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624697336562 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.686979974 49.4020404114 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.214285714 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17437291178 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531834478767 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628268685504 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11582713465 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841451516225 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.