For outlanders, living in non-mother togue nations means generally challenging, which is of inconvenience socially and pratically. My firm conviction is that these phenomena are extremely real in our daily lives, and will last forever.
Regarding to social communication, being incapable of mastering an foreign language usually exerts negative impacts on every aspect of social lives. For example, foreign employers are uable to integrate in a new environment or local communities.To begin with, there are difficulties in understanding the instuctions from others, especially the ones from the top level, triggering a series of misunderstandings. Thus, they are failed to be accepted and respected by the sorrounded colleagues,let alone competing for a higher position. The next point is that the inadequence of expressing their own opinions tend to make non-native speakers more conserved than local ones, when they try to show any kindnesss or cast any doubt, which are prone to miss opportunities to reinforce their friendship with others. Consequently, homesick and other mental desease will torture them so that these people tend to be in high pressure,some of which are too serious that they commit suicide to escape from reality.
As for the practical sides, problems aroused by the same reasons are more common, showing everywhere in a foreign counry.It is so frequent that there are lots of disputes occuring during daily conversation or based on the unfamiliar with local customs. An obvious example is that immigrants are unware of local rules so that they often annoy their neighbours uncontiously such as noise , strange food or privacy of others. Though it seems unimportant in their motherlands , it really matters in other parts of the world. Were they well learning foreign words, these things would have never happened.
In the light of the above points, mastering foreign language is such an really important thing that no one can afford the price of ignorance, Only this way can every one ,especailly those who live or work in foreign countries, enjoy a better life and ideal atmoshphere.
- Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 73
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 60
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving public transport.Discuss both these views 89
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 89
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, really, regarding, so, thus, well, as for, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35628742515 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01797894701 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637724550898 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.5283215675 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.083333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108132487666 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371600350428 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394359829647 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641882358369 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227462830607 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.