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: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
The past ease in the availability of fast food. Some laud it: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
: Fast food is now unitrend, while others do not. Do you agree or disagree?
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Sentence: Some laud its convience and relatively low cost, however, it is my personal view that fast food is detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to society at large.
Error: convience Suggestion: convince
Sentence: This would be examplified by the fact that obesity is on the rise, and a direct link is being cited between fast food and obesity in children.
Error: examplified Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Futher and more importantly, though, the modern habit of ready-made food is influencing our lifestyle and life quality in a great deal.
Error: Futher Suggestion: Further
Sentence: By way of conclusion, there are counless of adverse impacts of ready-made food on our life.
Error: counless Suggestion: countless
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 6.727 7.5
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