Some people think that good health is essential to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit= making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the advantages ?
Nowadays, some feel that healthiness and well-being is particularly vital to all people. Therefore, healthcare services should not be run by privately-owned firms, whose primary objective is making profit. While I do agree with this statement, I also believe that private healthcare services provide many advantages that outweigh disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are some drawbacks of private medicine. One drawback is that private medical services is quite costly, causing inaccessibility to the poor. If medical care is all run by profit=making organizations, many people suffering from chronic illnesses such as cancer or asthma may die without receiving medical treatment. Furthermore, there are some immoral private hospitals driven by incentives to gain money rather than saving people’s life. For example, unskilled doctors and careless nurses may put patient’s health in danger.
On the other hand, running profit-making medical services could bring several benefits. Firstly, private hospitals have shorter waiting lists for operations and appointments than state ones. As a result, patients can benefit from faster treatment and consultation with nearly no waiting time. Secondly, private clinics may share the responsibilities with state=owned healthcare institutions in taking care of the public’s health. This results in solving the issue of inadequate medical facilities and infrastructures in public-sector hospitals.
In conclusion, despite of some disadvantages, I argue that profit-making institutions play an integral role in providing better healthcare for all people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05240174672 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38112544956 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676855895197 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.951137583 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3571428571 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315733042591 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962743052953 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061065260365 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173983939017 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743681101658 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.51 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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