man & woman both are not equally suitable for work for their physical inherent
In this world of equal rights right now there is no differnce between man & woman.Man & woman are act togetherly to make anything better.Inspite of woman plhysical sturcture ,there is no chance to degrade them for any work which is sutable for man.For that reason the statement is not palatable at all.In this era of twenty first century it is the heyday of woman, so thnking about thier physical inherence for any work will be cosnidered tottaly absurd. Man & woman both has the equanimity for any work though they has born with the same physical structure.
Currently there are so much sectors where woman are just wondering man with thier works & sometimes beat man in some kind of field.Though in ancient time the ancestor man were thinking that woman are just too torpor & will not be able to do work outside the home ,that is now totaly anomolaus . For example, there was a time ,when woman were not have any stong predilection on science education. But the woman named Madam curie changed the definition & won a nobel prize for inventing some crucial things on rediation sector.
Physical inhernce mostly effective on sports sector but if we look aty the current wolrd we will not see any differnce.Because woman are playing every single game which have been played also by the man.Moreover ,sometimes in many country woman are so diligent that they are winning some tournament which can not be won by thier male team. For instance, In bangladesh the woman cricket team won the asia cup final on playing the final for the first time but there male team had failed to win after playing that for two times.
The sciencitist has discoverd that the woman brain has slightly less weight compare to the avarage man's weight. Howover, that is neglible because with that shortage of brain woman are also doing well in the intellgence , politician & others sectors where talent has needed. In many counties of the world the prime minister of that coutries are female & doing well rather than thier previous male leaders. Sone female leaders are also killed by the enemies because of thier shining thinking capabilty. If we look at pakistan the country lost thier legend female leader benzir vutto , In bangladesh the prime minister changed the countires economy & made the the country from under developed to developing.
In extrapolation, it can be stated now the world is growing with the help of both man & woman. Woman power is really a boon or the world developement.It will be exocerate for the world i f we think thier plhysical inherncy first.rather than looking at thir success rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91324200913 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57637263995 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.938757478 60.3974514979 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.714285714 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35430659085 0.243740707755 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122901352766 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112864794145 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204283960305 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136288884127 0.0667264976115 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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