It has been argued that the media controls the views and perception of society entirely and practically nothing can be done on it. Even though media exerts a crucial role in opinion mobilisation, I do not think that their influence is final and ultimate.
Admittedly, the media play a significant role in the opinion formation of the present society. That is, people obtain the latest news from around the world through media, both the electronic and the print. In many cases instead of providing factual and truthful information, media fabricate stories to meet their vested business interest. For instance, visual media in Kerala create some sensational news each day in order to increase their rating and people are under the vile influence of this media aggression. Therefore, many people get misguided by these types of sensational news tailored to suit the business interest of the media.
However, the influence of media on people cannot be considered as of a fatalistic character. If the majority of the people approach a problem in a certain way, the media will be forced to disseminate news and views reflecting the real sentiment of the people. Otherwise, such media will be boycotted and it would negatively affect their credibility and eventually the business too. For example, notwithstanding the unconditional support of the media, Hilary Clinton could not win the American presidential election, as the sentiment and mood of the people were against the ruling party.
By way of conclusion, even though media play a vital role in forming the opinion of the people, it is unlikely that people would consider it as conclusive or final. If the news and views publicized through these media do not represent the people's genuine and real wish, people will discard such pieces of information outright.
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 73
- Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this 87
- Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that vertical city is the best where people live and work in tall buildings Others think that horizontal city is better where there are few tall buildings Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79873314761 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547297297297 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9698452595 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.923076923 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267249828302 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993105974113 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527591914586 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16784619951 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402851755244 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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