A building is supposed to meet a wide variety of requirements. It has been suggested that the most important consideration while designing a building is its practical utility rather than the external appearance. I mostly agree with this view.
Admittedly, an attractive building will entice many that would be a centre of attraction. This appeal may encourage people to visit it, which in turn promote tourism. For example, the archaeologically and aesthetically impressive construction Red Fort, in New Delhi, with their bright and colourful designs attract thousands of tourists, both foreign and the domestic.
However, a building should serve the primary purpose of its construction. If the construction is meant for a dwelling purpose, the rooms should possibly be spacious and adequately ventilated and are expected to meet all the household requirements. These amenities can make the life in the house more convenient and comfortable, and in case it is a business establishment it is expected to have other facilities such as a parking area, fire and safety and lift and so on.
Besides, the building should be strong enough to withstand any natural calamities. Some buildings in Mumbai, for instance, constructed with elegant appearance, but without the strong foundation collapsed during a minor earthquake. As a result, many valuable lives were sacrificed, and lots of resources were wasted. Therefore, more than the outward appearance, the physical strength of a building should be yet another crucial consideration before any construction is made.
To summarise, there are many factors to be considered while constructing a building, the most vital purpose of which is to satisfy the requirements of what it is meant for such as convenience and safety. Authorities should permit the construction of a building only if these prerequisites are satisfied.
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 11
- Some people think that vertical city is the best where people live and work in tall buildings Others think that horizontal city is better where there are few tall buildings Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people think that human history has been a journey from ignorance to knowledge Others argue that this underestimates the achievements of ancient cultures and overvalues our accomplishments Discuss both the views and give your opinion 66
- Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4295532646 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24463779933 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.245048306 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204240578536 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680335480293 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744066283868 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119638319138 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936301360757 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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