You are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and street.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
-->describe the situation
-->Inform them about the possible consequences
-->give some suggestions to solve the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am Prabhjot Kaur, a resident of N2-502, Lifestyle homes, Vatika. I am writing this letter to bring you in the notice about the garbage problem in Vatika street.
There are two vacant plots at the entrance of the street, which has now turned into a garbage dumping place. The rubbish
collecting local vans are making the conditions worse by throwing the collected litter to the empty ground. Moreover, it was often observed by residents that people from nearby streets use this place as a dumping area.
This waste attracts numerous insects and mosquitoes which can be proved hazardous for the health of local people. Additionally,
the foul smell irritates the visitors and makes the environment unhygienic.
There is an urgent need to give proper attention to this issue. The local garbage collectors should be punished for not
abiding the norms and there should be the availability of municipal corporation vans in each street for rubbish collection.
Next, the plot owners must be instructed to enclose their areas with long length walls to make it unapproachable for outsiders
for throwing waste.
I strongly assert, this problem must be observed at the earliest and looking forward to immediate actions.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhjot Kaur
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| 2018-12-04 | Annamoreto | 85 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ge collectors should be punished for not abiding the norms and there should be th...
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... to make it unapproachable for outsiders for throwing waste. I strongly assert...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30882352941 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65537455608 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671568627451 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5424980901 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130245580734 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479879551685 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500761951343 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454333243734 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335207549091 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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