The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
The question, whether the machines will take our place in coming future, is rampant in this contemporary scenario. The trend of rapid improvement in machines can be explicitly analysed by watching various movies and series, where they predict rather dystopian model of future.Here, the prompt gives us utopian future where machines are only utilized as tool to fulfil our basic needs. Although persuading, i moslty disagree with the prompt, believing that the machine will be more than tool for human being and surpass our physical and mental ability in future. My this assertion is based on two compelling argument with justified premises and a concession, highlighting when my argument may not hold water.
Firstly, while at the first glace we may prematurely agree that the machines are just mechanical tools, but if we dive deeper into the subject, then we may find that most of the machines, though in control of human, are far more better than human in term of physical abilities. For instance, excavation of hard rocks is carried out by excavator and back hoes and it is impossible for us to do so by our bare hands,even if driver control the vehicle. Many jobs are lost in past centuries due to industralization. Farming hands are replaced by tractors and lifting and ordinary jobs are done by machines. Even now-a-days, instead of hiring humans for physical jobs companies are rather buying equipments. So, these scenario proves that the machines have outclassed humans in term of physical abilities, although admittedly control is still under human.
Secondly, with the advancement of technology in various fields, the machines are outwitting the human brains as well, even to the extend that the machines may one day surpass the thinking and reasoning ability of human brain. For instance, most of the office work, which requires significant mental abilities, are done by computers. We use computer to do almost all activites which are taxing for our brain to perform. With the development of AI, the computer can even think like a human so it won;t be surprising that the controlling job of human will also be taken away by machines.
Admittedly, being concious animal, human may not go further to the limit that machines may outwit them, given that these machines may present greatest threat to humanity and even may lead to the extinction. But, it may not be the case as this view may not be unanimous and universal.
In conclusion, the subject is moot and there are no easy answers. Will we allow the machines to surpass our inherent mental and physical ability? Answer to this question is ambigious as it is unpredictable which path we take in coming years. But, looking at various facts and news all round the world, it is more inevitible that machines will surmount us in coming future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Here
...redict rather dystopian model of future.Here, the prompt gives us utopian future whe...
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Line 1, column 552, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...surpass our physical and mental ability in future. My this assertion is based on two comp...
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Line 2, column 225, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...es, though in control of human, are far more better than human in term of physical abilitie...
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , even
...ssible for us to do so by our bare hands,even if driver control the vehicle. Many job...
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Line 2, column 707, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this scenario' or 'these scenarios'?
Suggestion: this scenario; these scenarios
...anies are rather buying equipments. So, these scenario proves that the machines have outclasse...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tting the human brains as well, even to the extend that the machines may one day surpass t...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...g the human brains as well, even to the extend that the machines may one day surpass t...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'present the greatest'.
Suggestion: present the greatest
...wit them, given that these machines may present greatest threat to humanity and even may lead to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2340.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96815286624 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69294629299 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526539278132 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5511408237 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.55 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325542045077 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949408508962 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908102237589 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18963591029 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496325252071 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.