People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Sometimes, we question to ourselves: what really determine the attitude and behavior we possess? Is it the society that determine our character or is it the situation we face? Here, the prompt claims strongly that immediate situation is more likely to determine our attitude rather than the society. However, in my view, mostly disagreeing to the author of prompt, society is more responsible to build up the attitude we have. In defense of my thesis, two evidence have been provided and a concession is noted out which elucidates the scenarios where my thesis may be subverted.
Firstly, the attitude developed in an individual is culmination of how his behavior is shaped by society over the course of time (from birth to the present time he is living in). Attitude of an individual is highly contingent on the society he lives in because society is the institution belongs when he first enter to the world. From then on, it is society which teach him all the values he must possess to be a social being and to be essential part of the community. For instance, an individual born in an Indian culture is taught about his custom, tradition and values so that attitude he possess will have positive effect in society.
Secondly, the attitude, we possess from the society, is forever ingrained in our conduct and efforts. In other words, no matter how the current situation may be, our inured attitude hardly changes. In the time of critical situation, the way we react to the situation is highly determined by the entrenched attitude we possess from society. For instance, a person who have biased view about black community will never accept black person. Even if he is saved by black person, he will have biased view towards black community.
Admittedly, in some cases, our infixed attitude may change dramatically. Specially, some critical cases, which affect us deep inside, coerce us to take different route than we might have taken.
In conclusion, the subject matter is moot and there are no easy verdict on what determine our eccentric attitude. But, looking at this topic based on current understanding and evidences provided above, the society is more likely to determine our attitude rather than immediate situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'possesses'.
Suggestion: possesses
...radition and values so that attitude he possess will have positive effect in society. ...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'verdicts'?
Suggestion: verdicts
...ct matter is moot and there are no easy verdict on what determine our eccentric attitud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98927613941 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69410719912 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512064343164 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.777389275 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.388888889 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 5.21951772744 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227194354045 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844425028633 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845634087572 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135029075281 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787778075146 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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