These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about most of the people think some type of jobs is appropriate for women, on the other hand some other employments are suitable for men. If it should be view as positive and negative impact on employment. while it is claimed that each job need skill and knowledge to be done professionally. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both side of argument.
To embark with, There are several reason in the support of why some people think some careers are suitable for women and some for men concerned to advantages to the employment. One of them is that men are strong then women because women are emotional thats why some job are not suitable for them. It can also be agreed that job which is suitable for men like army, police etc and for women like teacher, nursing etc.
Those who disadvantages for the appropriate job for both men and women have a different view and say that it can actually not be a good because each career needs its own skill, knowledge. Then there are consume that most important factor in choosing a job as the interest of the person.
To end, while there are strong argument on both side of case. My personal opinion is that some type of employment are more suitable for men and other type of employment are more appropriate for women. I would strongly recommend that today all have equal right so job was also given to both men and women equally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'viewed'?
Suggestion: viewed
...s are suitable for men. If it should be view as positive and negative impact on emp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uitable for men. If it should be view as positive and negative impact on employme...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...tive and negative impact on employment. while it is claimed that each job need skill ...
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Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
... argument. To embark with, There are several reason in the support of why some people think...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... then women because women are emotional thats why some job are not suitable for them....
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...ts own skill, knowledge. Then there are consume that most important factor in choosing ...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...trong argument on both side of case. My personal opinion is that some type of employment are mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54752851711 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40543510797 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505703422053 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1418847783 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362842306283 0.242375264174 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130998233228 0.0925447433944 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141452730586 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227333706007 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691792257219 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.5310837438 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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