Tobacco is a kind of drug. People have been free to use it. Some people think that it should be illegal to use it comparing with other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
Recently, the issue of whether tobacco is illegal to use it comparing with other drugs has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. The following essay will present my view of the problem.
First, I would mention is that tobacco brings some benefits. First of all, it has been proved that Nicotine which has been contained in cigarettes to some extent can help people become relaxing, comfortable. Especially with a person who is stressful uses tobacco as a solution. The second, tobacco manufacturers give a huge of money of tax into the state budget. At the same time, it also is an important factor in the decline of the unemployment rate due to the abundant employment market of tobacco industries.
The second point, there are many drawbacks to this use. Cigarettes, which influence a seriously healthy, causing lung cancer that is one of the diseases bringing tallest mortality rate in Vietnam. Smoke causes terrible harm not only to drug addicts but also to those have been breathed it such as their wife, kids, etc.. According to the statistics, the children were born from a mother living in a smoked environment get a high rate of birth defects. Tobacco, when comparing to other drugs using to treat diseases, is a drug brings dangers.
All in all, the disadvantages of smoking outweigh the advantages. I absolutely agree that we should strictly rule to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93277310924 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6985390205 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651260504202 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3046328524 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276518564023 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839996936283 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813624261755 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152958132885 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286410821285 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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