Some people say that new advancements in factory farming and the creation of new combinations of fruits and vegetables are not beneficial while others disagree with this opinion.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is no question that technological progress affects every industry today and revolution in agriculture sector is no exception. Advocates are of the view that new technologies in farming has a lot of positive outcomes while their opponents find it harmful for society. In this essay I would like to discuss both the view points with my perception.
Undoubtedly, growth of human population makes new demands for all spheres of life. this especially applies to food industry so technological progress could be very useful for finding the necessary solutions. For instance, artificial creation of new sorts of vegetables and fruits, development of fertilizers efficiency have a huge impact on the problem of food shortage. Thus, it can help people making more products and exclude the factors of weather and harvest failures in agriculture sector.
On the other hand, some proportion of masses assert that this approach has significant drawbacks related to the interfering with natural processes. As a prime example they give an argument that modification of food could cause changes on genetic level. As a result, an emergence of new bacteria and viruses which have not fully researched by science could cause a real threat for humanity in the form of incurable diseases.
Taking into consideration all the mentioned above there are clear and strong arguments at both sides. Personally, I inclined to be thinking that human race should continue developing new technologies in agriculture sector. On my opinion, it can solve the global problem of starving for the humanity. Among this, the development of medicine is crucial for the future progress because it should reduce negative impact on health caused by food modification.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32363636364 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94645549771 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7432036483 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216289610545 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068269278734 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458849091408 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122880723566 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250092553918 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.