The given bar chart clearly illustrates information regarding the number of students, divided by gender, playing 6 particular sports in an English town in 2012. Overall, it is obvious that there were 411 pupils (233 boys and 178 girls) in total, most of whom (91) joined swimming.
In detail, it can be seen that football was the second most popular, followed by tennis, because there were 88 players (50 boys and 38 girls) and 81 players (60 boys and 21 girls) in the sports respectively. Meanwhile, the figure of students at badminton was almost equal to that of those at cycling, or at 70 and 57 in respective. Finally, the quantity of children (24) for hockey accounted for the lowest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, regarding, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 562.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 120.0 196.424390244 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68333333333 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.30975091965 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63517867832 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 154.8 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1841600576 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276555712805 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115465687425 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125440634407 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218358195523 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114628009895 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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