Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Please write and submit your essay on the above topic.
Nowadays, big cities have developed at an astonishing speed, and these changes have influenced people's lives relatively. Some people claim that it is getting more difficult to live in the big cities, while others do not agree with this idea. Personally speaking, I would agree that the difficulties which living in the big cities are more than its convenience.
Without a doubt, living in big cities has numerous advantages. Firstly, big cities would have more job opportunities than small cities. More job openings would benefit the people from unemployment and to get more money. Moreover, with the development of advanced technology and civilization, big cities have planned high-quality communities to accomodate their residents, for example, parents will get better education for their kids. Besides, public transportation operates more hours to convenient the public.
Although these benefits living in big cities are obvious, disadvantages of living there have outweighed. First of all, people who live in the big cities would face more stress than others because there are more competitions among each other. Secondly, the traffic condition is not good in big cities despite the powerful public transportation system. Because of the limited width of the road and large number of citizens, people will face traffic congestion everyday. It is hard to imagine a life would be easy when a person has to spend an hour even more on the traffic. Last not not least, there are more health problems in big cities than small cities considering the pollution issue, stress issue and so on. Because of a large number of people who work in big cities, the car would produce more polluted gas, and office building would use more energy and generate more waste, big cities environmental issue is critical, and hence would influence people's health. Based on some reports by N university, there are higher chance for people who stayed in the big city to suffer from asthma. Personally speaking, I would like to live in the small city because health issue is the one I have considered the most. Being around the fresh air in the outside, and having more time with the family are the things I value the most while big cities cannot bring to me.
While it is convenient to live in big cities, I would like to say that life in small cities is far better than living in big cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99244332494 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63299737267 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48362720403 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5531833833 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.315789474 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228712988379 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944635216647 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499590101452 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167166654162 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428620549169 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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