Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university peofessors
Throughout history, education has been an important issue in humans' lives. Education plays a significant role in people's future successful life because people are dependent on education in many ways including to find a decent job or having a good social status. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether university professors should be paid more to do their job more effectively or the universities should not use salaries as a motivation for professors to improve education. Even though some people may be inclined toward the idea that universities should spend more money on professor's wages, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that salaries are not related to the improvement of education. I personally contend that increasing professor's salaries can effectively elevate the quality of education at universities. In what follows, I will illustrate my vantage point through three major reasons.
The most significant reason that I want to mention regarding this issue is that increased salaries will bring a sense of responsibility and dedication to professors. From a psychological standpoint, when you are awarded for a task, you feel that it is your responsibility to do that job in the best way. Actually, when a professor receives more money for what she/he does, she feels she is responsible for what he is paid for. Therefore, it can be inferred that when you are paid more money for a job, morally you are more dedicated to investing your time end energy in the best way. This would definitely improve the quality of education.
Another equally important reason that I would like to highlight is that a better salary is a very good motivation to become a good professor at the university. In fact, when professors at the university receive high amounts of money, many talented students find it interesting to become a professor due to a high salary that guarantees their future prosperity. An empirical study done by the researchers in the University of North Carolina at the United State shows that the majority of students (80 percent) with A average GPA (highest grade) want to find a job with a very good salary. Hence, money is a very attractive incentive to attract good professors to universities that can teach better and elevate the quality of education. It goes without saying that the salary is very important for teachers.
Finally, it could be unfair not to mention the fact that better salaries can bring happiness to the professor's lives and this consequently increase their quality of life. When a professor has a good private life, it also affects the quality of his job and improves his teaching methods because they are happy and fresh. For example, I had a chemistry teacher at the university that he had to work late after university to earn more money. He was always tired and he had not enough energy to teach us and answer student's question properly. Working so hard really hurt his profession and decreased his quality of teaching while he was a good and talented teacher.
To wrap it up, it is my deep belief that increasing professor's salaries would increase the quality of education. All in all, it is obvious that money is important for all of the people and is a good motivation for them to work better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'GPA the highest'.
Suggestion: GPA the highest
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, finally, hence, if, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2747.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 556.0 407.700716846 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94064748201 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85616664053 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447841726619 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 899.1 618.680645161 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1864895336 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.434782609 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1739130435 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318225464988 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924498386495 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078464268629 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177375187594 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496084096354 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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