People pursue dangerous activities like skydiving, motorcycle sports, white-water river rafting etc. Do you support? If yes, why and if not, why?
A little retrospection would reveal and history has been witnessed that sports activities is a part and parcel of our society. However, people likely to do some dangerous activities such as, skydiving, motorcycle sports and white-water river rafting. I do not endorse the view to do this type of sports activities and I will discuss my view points in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, numerous factors are associated to demerits of this phenomenon. The most prominent is, doing these activities seems to very dangerous for common individual as when they watch these activities on television which led them to try that things in real life, consequently, they become a victim of accidents and even left their lives while doing these activities. For instance, Paul Walker, a Hollywood actor, was died in car accident because he was driving his car so fast on the road.
In addition to it, it also required lots of budget to do deadly sports. As a result, if someone wanted to do these sports then they need to hire some professional which they have to pay lot of money. Needless to say, these demerits have a far-reaching impact on participants.
To conclude, I firmly believe, undoubtedly, to doing these adventurous sports has number of demerits. However, it also has few merits which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03211009174 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89001383235 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9412398195 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7272727273 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170604155262 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637981508005 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10153631502 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095019083221 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845484930873 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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