The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given graph and water shows the water use and water consumption in two different countries Brazil and Congo.
Firstly,from the line graph the domestic and industrial use start at zero in the year 1990 and maintain consistency up to 1950 and then it increases slowly . While coming to the agriculture it initially start at 500Km3 in year 1900 and increases to the highest level to 3000Km3 in the year 2000.
Secondly, when coming to the table the maximum water use 26,500 Km2 takes place in Brazil in year 2000 which is inversely proportional to the population 176 million and using the land area of 359m3.
Thirdly, the population in Congo is 5.2 million and water use is directly proportional to water use 100 Km2 with land area 8m3.
In conclusion in graph shows the maximum water use by Agriculture sector. As for industrial and domestic the water use is minimal.While coming to the table there is a connection between population ,water use and land area. Depending upon the population, land area and water use is increasing. Hence water became an essential thing in these countries.
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Sentence: The given graph and water shows the water use and water consumption in two different countries Brazil and Congo.
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Sentence: Secondly, when coming to the table the maximum water use 26,500 Km2 takes place in Brazil in year 2000 which is inversely proportional to the population 176 million and using the land area of 359m3.
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