The diagram shows the stages and equipment used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The graphs illustrate the procedures of cement and concrete production separately, and the materials used in the processes.
it can be clearly seen that mixer is necessary for both processing. Overall, the used materials in cement production are more than concrete production.
In cement production, limestone and clay are made together by using crusher into powder and via the mixer, rotating heater is applied for heating then. After that, the composition will be placed on the grinder, and finally, the procedure of cement is completed as well as packed with bags. it is one of the element for the concrete production.
As for the concrete production, it indicates the proportion of each materials. Gravel is the most critical part, which gets 50% of the total component. Sand is also important with 25%. cement and water is need for 15% and 10% independently. These compositions will be mixed in a concrete mixer to become concrete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...d the materials used in the processes. it can be clearly seen that mixer is neces...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... completed as well as packed with bags. it is one of the element for the concrete ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cement
...onent. Sand is also important with 25%. cement and water is need for 15% and 10% indep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11688311688 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89126612421 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5973812761 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6363636364 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265212594624 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101054318005 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780596122101 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181233874766 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036345791078 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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