You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Describe the situation, explain your problems why it is difficult to work and say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am xyz, a final year student of computer stream. I would like to draw your attention towards my accommodation deteriorated condition and seek your interference in controlling it.
Presently I am staying in room number 202 in boys hostel Chanakya and share it with a first year student Mr Abc of same branch. Everything was fine prior to his arrival however, situation now is going out of control as even on my repetitive request he is reluctant in playing loud music full day. Not only loudness but also his friends gathering and gossip is my concern.
Being a final year student its extremely difficult for me to concentrate on studies when a group of students keeps talking aloud. I had tried to explain my concern but he paid a deaf ear. If he had shown any sign of change in his attitude and behavior, I would not have complained.
Therefore, I request you to either shift me or my roommate to another room so that we both can have a peaceful time. it will be really helpful if you take an immediate action.
yours faithfully,
xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... that we both can have a peaceful time. it will be really helpful if you take an i...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ful if you take an immediate action. yours faithfully, xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62303664921 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70904846019 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706806282723 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7006812541 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137907145622 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04600922236 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353730429682 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750277201616 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305683937069 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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