You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say- give details of the job-why do you think the interview went well?-why do you need to know the resu

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You have recently attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the decision. Write a letter to HR manager of the company and say
- give details of the job
-why do you think the interview went well?
-why do you need to know the result?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to know the result of my job interview which was held on 15th July 2019.

The interview was scheduled at company's main office abc street, chennai. I had attended Java tete-a-tete in morning slot 9-11am and my candidate number is A12345.

I literally felt, I had excelled that day due to the body language and facial expressions of interviewer. The interview went long, he asked me several cross questions which I had replied confidently. When I was going through the interview, not only I had answered every single question but also given complete detail and explained my response with illustrations. At the end he had nodded and smiled at me which boost my confidence in getting positive outcome.

I would like to know the result as this is one of my dream company and I have always dreamed of joining it. Although, I have received an offer from a distant company yet I would like to wait due to the fact that this company is in proximity of my house. If I know the result, it will be easy to take a decision and move forward.

Hopefully by next week I will have received the result and joined the company of my desire. Looking forward to hear affirmative from you.

Yours faithfully,
Aparajita

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this l...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 109, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...e company of my desire. Looking forward to hear affirmative from you. Yours faithfu...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75454545455 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67717626003 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6324744138 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4615384615 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16065640988 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528351013591 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431140808437 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092666098893 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372161618923 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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