You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain why you are selling
• describe the furniture
• suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture
Dear Zafar,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to tell you that I have to sell my furniture and was thinking you would be interested in purchasing some of the items.
I wanted to share the news that I got a new job offer for the post of manager in renown manufacturing company in Islamabad. I would be moving to Islamabad within a month as I have to look for an apartment to settle there. You had shown interest in some of the furniture items last time you visited my place and I thought you might be interested in purchasing few items.
The furniture includes a 3 seater brown sofa set, a 3x4 table made of wood and a bed with side tables. All the items are a year old and in good condition and I have re-polished the wooden stuff 3 months back.
You are welcomed to visit me next week on Saturday, July 6, 2019 around 6:00 pm to have look at the furniture before buying it. Just drop me a message on my cell to remind me of your visit.
Keep in touch.
Yours truly,
Shazia Iqbal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...g you would be interested in purchasing some of the items. I wanted to share the news th...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...own manufacturing company in Islamabad. I would be moving to Islamabad within a m...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...settle there. You had shown interest in some of the furniture items last time you visited m...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24479166667 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36634364543 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7872391691 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0909090909 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242367855598 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805257085298 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770768979184 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125997959946 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789107085343 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.