In many countries, the proportion of older people is increasing. Is this trend positive or negative to the society?
There is a tendency in many countries that the portion of older people is gradually going upward as the development of economy. Whereas, this phenomenon could be a social problem although the older citizens would undoubtedly make contributions to the society as a whole.
To begin with, higher level of older people rate would undeniably impair the workforce quality in a society. There is no doubt that certain phsycally intense occupation is no fit for elder people. And for most aged workers, they are probably not more creative and knowledgeable, though more experienced, than young workers, who could have accepted higher education and be more professional. Thus this trend could exert negative affect on the economic growth.
What's more, he/she could unavoidably get stuck into more or less ailments when an individual gets older since one will be more physically vulnerable as age grows. Older people's increasing visits to hospitals and clinics require more government investments toward public health to meet the growing need in terms of medical service, which could definitely heaven the financial burden of government so that they have to curtail expenditure of other aspects.
Last but not least, it is a must to pay the annual pension for retired workers. And this expenditure heavily depends on the total number of retired workers who are mostly older people. This could cause essential social problem if the gap of pension emerges. And it is also a burden to government.
To sum up, the upwarding proportion of older citizens would have negative effects on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, whereas, no doubt, more or less, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2265625 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71982737274 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6107802259 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204850790054 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732275252184 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647770283042 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120959023144 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555656436484 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.