A majority of people, who dedicate most of the adulthood to work, considers job contentment as a pivotal factor of personal wellbeing. There a numerous factors attributable to job satisfaction, but the aspiration is unrealistic for all labourer.
To begin with, job satisfaction is built on several factors. The first and foremost factor is remuneration which help employees afford their life expense. In most of the case, people would striving for being offered a well paid position. However, there are employees considering passion as priority of their job, in which they could fullfill their dream by utilising their talent for their interests as well as being recognized by others. In addition, compensation also plays an vital role in job satisfaction, which will ensure their reward according to the level of contribution for the company . By that, employees would be motivated and encouraged in working.
On the other hand, employees contentment, however, often fail to materialize when encountering the cruel reality. With the harsh competitiveness and the unstable of the economy, it urge companies to enhance their working quality as well as efficiency in order to survive. Therefore, more and more qualifications of employees is entailed so that they could , to meet the work requirement, as a result, unceasingly learning is a must for those people so as not to be emitted from the labour market. Furthermore, this economic trend also create a unbearable work burden for the workers, and overtime working is a essential requirement of the job. this lead an increase in the number of ailments including mental health ( stress, depression) and physical health ( heart disease).
In brief, there are a great number of elements leading to job satisfaction, nevertheless, when it come to reality, the expectancy is often impractical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'factor'?
Suggestion: factor
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'strive'
Suggestion: strive
...ense. In most of the case, people would striving for being offered a well paid position....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere are employees considering passion as priority of their job, in which they cou...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Suggestion: .
...he level of contribution for the company . By that, employees would be motivated a...
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Message: Did you mean 'urges'?
Suggestion: urges
...ess and the unstable of the economy, it urge companies to enhance their working qual...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...employees is entailed so that they could , to meet the work requirement, as a resu...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29831932773 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10328846638 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4966995621 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291954333586 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997067340538 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716396800071 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193695384424 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828019255819 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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