There arises no questions over the verity of this statement that natural resources, be it crude oil or portable water, are consumed more than ever before. Agreed, this is a Pandora's Box in itself and hence triggered scores of issues. This essay intends to explain some problems arising out of this context and suggestions to mitigate it's ill effects.
To begin with, there are several problems of overexploitation of natural resources.
Firstly, the excessive use of oil and water can cause scarcity of these resources. As a result, it creates a host of problems for future generations.Lastly, using different kinds of vehicles is the major problem beacuse these vehicles run with the help of oil such as petrol, diesel.Not only this, these vehicles emit obnoxious gases in the air, and produces serious health hassles like heart attack, skin cancer.
Though the situation raises a red flag but the dismal picture can be corrected if taken a multi-pronged approaches for it.The solutions are not complex but the onus is largely on authorities. Governmer had better chalk out a plan to alleviate this problem.They need to make stringent laws against overexploitation of natural resources.what is more, authorities should need to create campaigns to aware the individuals about the importance of resources.
At last, it can be summed up that no doubt rising pollution from vehicles and shortage of water and oil are the problems surfacing up owing to exploitation of natural resources.This menace can be solved by adopting the measurements that have been mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, so, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22134387352 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07282702594 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.9760068301 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.777777778 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266368356919 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105978602825 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638911581812 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143115639018 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436345354719 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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