The chart shows the percentage of the adult population employed in different categories in 2003 and 2013.
The given bar chart illustrates the figure for people hired in distinct career groups measured from 2003 to 2013.
This can clearly be seen that business reached the highest point of the population while the unemployed experienced the lowest figure in both the years 2003 and 2013.
Looking at the information in more detail, in 2003, the group of business reached the highest proportion of people, which occupied approximately 30% and made at least triple population as high as that in the group of self-employed. Also, the percentage of the medical sector reached the 18 marks, with that of the engineering category not far behind (16%). Besides, the proportion of education was 12%, compared to 9% of hospitality and 5% of the unemployed.
As illustrated, after ten years, business and medical had a fairly equal percentage of the population, which accounted for just over 25%. In addition, engineering and self-employed sectors witnessed a considerable increase to 18% and 15%, respectively. In contrast, hospitality and education experienced a dramatically downward movement to 7% and 5%, correspondingly. As a whole, the highest category still belonged to the unemployed, which made up 3% of the population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, look, so, still, while, at least, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32642487047 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21389737743 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59067357513 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3502788357 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188302309471 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634664101003 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469007353776 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109912569493 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253145224428 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.