The bar chart illustrate the percentage of American adults in various sector of employment between 2003 to 2013.
Overall, it is explicitly observed that business sector is top on the list in both given years. whereas, unemployment sector get collapse in both given years.
Now turning back to details, a dramatic rise was accounted in the business sector around 47% in the year 2003 and nearly one quarter in the year 2013, while there had been a swift raise in self employed in the year 2013, nearly one third. However, in the year 2003 it is almost a quarter of 2013 percentage. Moreover, in medical sector the percentage in the 2003 is same of building 2013 nearly 20%. On the other hand, 2013 in building remains same to 2003 medical sector around 10%.
Moving further, there is a minimal percentage manifested in education training in the year 2003 it is just under 8% while in the year 2013 it is just over 17% after that a downfall was seen in the 2003 in hotel industry under 5% and 2013 remains same percentage of education training 2013. Respectively, unemployed comprised to near 12% in the year 2003 and 5% in the year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...is top on the list in both given years. whereas, unemployment sector get collapse in bo...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is top on the list in both given years. whereas, unemployment sector get collapse in bo...
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oyment sector get collapse in both given years. Now turning back to details, a d...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ile in the year 2013 it is just over 17% after that a downfall was seen in the 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, third, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65174129353 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52673631902 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47263681592 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6228538257 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264010844399 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127783126848 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109966972519 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186660784918 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134838129943 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.