Every living creature on the Earth has the right to live freely, and no one should be deprived of freedom. I concur that a zoo is futile; therefore, in this essay, I will elaborate my view with the help of several examples.
To embark upon, the various species of animals and birds are captivated against their will. This hampers their freedom such as roaming around freely, searching for prey ,and mating in season. As a result, they tend to become aggressive and might slip into depression. To illustrate, In India, a zookeeper was killed by an agitated Lion, who was in captivation for five years. Moreover, the health of these species are miserable due to unhygienic living conditions. The factors that contributes to such conditions are improper cleanliness, dirty surroundings , filthy water, and low quality food. This has led to various illnesses among faunas, and some of them are even on the verge of death.
Furthermore, most of them are teased and bullied by the visitors for their entertainment like some people throw stones and bottles at animals and birds, and others imitate and irritate them by making various gestures. This has resulted in several mishaps in zoos; for example, a man was killed by an angry leopard when he fell in his cage. To contrast, a few people assert that endangered species are secure in cages; however, I believe that other options can be adopted to ensure safety such as wildlife sanctuaries and national parks, where animals can roam freely.
In conclusion, keeping animals and birds in confinement has not only proven detrimental to these species but also for humans. The Government and various organizations should spread awareness among people about other methods available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08070175439 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67724420986 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3982506936 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0189588564186 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00674757692145 0.084324248473 8% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177521059918 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0168190435755 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291314380075 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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