Solar enegy is become more and more popular as a resource of household enery in many countries around the world. Why is that? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar enegy?
It is true that solar energy resource is one of several main resources which is using on household and others. In this essay, I will give reasons why solar energy become more popular these days, and I also discuss about its benefits, as well as its drawback to the society.
There are various reasons why solar energy is becoming one of main resources of household. Firstly, the develop of modern technology allows us to build new machines, which helps people save the money by using natural resource instead of artificial one. Secondly, the population growth leads to the lack of energy production, electricity, for example, can't distribute to rural areas. Therefore, people have to use machines to get energy from solar, which improves their standard of living.
The main advantage of using solar energy as a source of household is that it reduces the cost of living for inhabitants. Buying a solar rooftop to control the temperature of water in houses are more affordable than using electricity to boil the water instead. However, there is still negative impact to people life by using solar energy. People who are using solar energy depend more on the weather. In some extreme temperatures countries, for example, which has cold weather and no sunshine over months, individuals are unable to use solar machines to serve their daily life such as water machine. Furthermore, using solar instead of electric energy might affect to the economic of a country because citizens do not need to buy electric from their governments to distribute for their house, which reduces an enormous profit to states.
In conclusion, although solar energy plays an important role in our daily life, governments should to aware their citizens about its advantages and disadvantages in the long-term.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...f main resources of household. Firstly, the develop of modern technology allows us to build...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y production, electricity, for example, cant distribute to rural areas. Therefore, p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11945392491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64735999642 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.167729628 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.384615385 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230512744172 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102574442408 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669943395096 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152416830881 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536828333845 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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