In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. Which factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it.
These days, it is true that many people graduated with the high qualifications are still struggling with job seeking, some are unemployment. In this essay, I will give some reasons for this cause, also suggest some measures to adopt this issue.
There are several factors why people are still unemployed, although they have a high degree in their study. The main reason is that universities nowadays have less practical lessons for students. Consequently, after students’ graduation, they lack of necessary skills which essential need in the work place, so they might not pick for the job among other applicants. The second reason is that attitudes of applicants are needed for the consideration of employer. For example, some people who have higher education think that they are better than others, they tend to be arrogant and usually offer a high salary for the position.
However, there are a number of measures that could implement to enhance people’s job opportunities. Firstly, institutions should provide more training lessons in the class room, as well as some internship trips for students. This helps students gain more experience during their study and improve their skills. Secondly, companies should open some workshops for employees, so this helps workers understand more about the requirement and role for the job. As a result, they could offer a reasonable salary of their level.
In conclusion, there are a majority of factors that leads to the unemployment of highly qualified workers, but organizations and individuals could adopt some measures to combat this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3557312253 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88237973238 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7238213324 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12938755148 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456333016321 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366111027563 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866112996465 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247202533654 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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