The pie charts indicate the amount of three types of nutrients that are eaten in the usual meals.
As it is seen, in the first meal of day (break fast) these three nutrients occupied the lowest amount of proportion in all figures, although added sugar and saturated fat equally by 16% are more than sodium (14%).
Nearly half of the sodium usage goes for dinner, moreover more than a third of saturated fat related to night meal and approximately a quarter of added sugar is for dinner. The next percentage of sodium is connected to lunch by 29% as same as saturated fat by 26% but added sugar is less than two others (19%). added sugar is used as the main part of the snacks nearly half of the proportion, the next is saturated fat and sodium by 21% respectively.
- Some people support the development in agriculture such as factory farming and scientificcreation of new types of fruits and vegetables. Others oppose this view and support otherdevelopments. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
- The flow chart illustrate the consequences of deforestation.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.Write at least 150 words. 11
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 78
- happy 11
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Added
...dded sugar is less than two others 19%. added sugar is used as the main part of the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 621.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43571428571 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39313431231 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7338044729 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0748550272409 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507816647887 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431624246236 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072628957811 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439439177728 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.77 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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