Nowadays tourist and its related industry is one of the most prominent parts of economy in advanced countries as well as developing countries. Their behaviors in host places have gotten one of the controversial subjects among local people and some of them believe that tourists should obey the rules of local society whilst, others have diverse idea. Personally I am kind of individuals who definitely support the first group (tourist should accept social and environmental responsibility).
At the one hand, when travelers inter to foreign territory with myriad of new things such as new cultures and obligations, it is the best opportunity to familiar with other local dishes, cultures, new peoples notions, and so on but it could be fulfilled when you be responsible and obey the rules of society and around environment and expose yourself in cultures mainstream. Ones might be omitted lots of situation by denying the local behavior and not be responsible for its behavior.
On the other hand, it is such as pleasant and illustrates respectfulness of individuals to contribute with society and environmental limitation. Imagine a situation that a female tourist comes to our country and face with obligation to cover her hair with a scarf, at the first time this subject may be a little discussing but doing such a kind activity by tourists indicates that they respect to hosts individuals.
In a nutshell, being in charge of social and environmental in foreign country by tourist shows positive aspects of communication between humanities more over it is due to progress about moralities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 375, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: One's
...expose yourself in cultures mainstream. Ones might be omitted lots of situation by d...
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Line 2, column 397, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of situations'.
Suggestion: lots of situations
...tures mainstream. Ones might be omitted lots of situation by denying the local behavior and not b...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'host'.
Suggestion: host
...tourists indicates that they respect to hosts individuals. In a nutshell, being in c...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is due to progress about moralities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1976744186 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03626944712 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9739859651 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.625 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225834139951 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957267849562 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066645742398 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125195338317 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859453637371 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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