• You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you have moved
• describe the new house
• invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Raj,
How are you? I hope you’ve been doing well. Sorry for having been out of touch for a short while. There have been some changes in my life and I wanted to let you know the latest from my side.
The big news is that I have changed my house and moving to a new apartment nearby to my office. During our last meeting, I told you about my parents; planning to move with us, and so they have finally moved. I was urgently needed a spacious house to accommodate the family of 4 adults, and so we managed.
This new house is big with 3 bedrooms and a dining hall; moreover, the balcony provided facilitates you to grow a few saplings. It is near the big sports complex, and so we can go for the morning walk; get into some sports activities for physical fitness.
When you are planning to come here? For your information, we are planning to celebrate our 2nd wedding anniversary and it will be great if come over to be a part of this celebration. You will have time to meet my parents and wander around the city. Of course, you must stay with us. There’s plenty of room and we will pick you up at the airport.
Please let me know your plans and I look forward to seeing you.
Best Regards
Yogesh Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28017241379 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35314432166 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612068965517 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5433501885 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0625 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224731938422 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767171720718 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432006315992 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124004353998 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039712506204 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.