Hallucination trumps reality, magic mushroom glom inside my backyard gives me more insight to quantum physics and high energy chemistry. How sarcastic high society chasing heroin addicted junkie’s work as highly saluted art, calling imagination “surpasses” the fundamental fabric of science.
To sparky, the professions require at least professional knowledge to comment may just need some “imaginationary.” Human academic knowledge since neoanthropology has become so complex, a renowned scientist would spend decades to muster the very minor subject of their main report focus. Not mentioning cross field studying usually requires a 200-300 people team to have a minor impact on the direction of human evolution. Those who has a liberal art degree may have absolute-zero idea how complex human applied, engineering and social science has grown. They may sometime grab a magazine from the side self of a check out isle and pretend to be an evangelion of high science(art). This is the story of imagination becomes more important, to articulate an façade of mutual understanding.
While one may not be aspiring to be elitist in their profession, knowledge’s quality as a transferrable entity sprawling on the library shelfs, makes it possible for it to be shared amongst each other - in fact, universities and colleges exists for this reason. Without the elucidation and documentation of the works of those before us, we would ignorantly reinvent the wheel for millenials to come. When the next generation comes, we pass on them what we have know, and perhaps unwittingly imagined. Consequently, they go ahead to more successful than we were. Therefore, knowledge is of crucial to our survival as a species.
Another example exists in the professions related to the world of business. An enterprising business entrepreneur needs to imagine how he can change the face of his business before he utilizes the knowledge available with him for doing the same. Bill Gates is one of the richest men in the world today. He started as a common man who had a vision of creating something that would change the world of software. Today almost every computer in the world has one or the other Microsoft application installed. This has been possible because Bill Gates had let his imagination run free and he later devised the tools for realizing his dreams.
Art is one such field where there is no scope for success without imagination. Painters, poets, writers etc. all have to imagine before they can put their thoughts on paper. Literary works by famous writers are by and large works of fiction that have stemmed from their imagination. J. K. Rowling is rolling in millions because she imagined a character called Harry Potter and authored a series of books that revolve around a fictional storyline. This book series catapulted her to instant fame and fortune in a short span of time. There are thousands of writers struggling to get a break, and the one who has actually succeed in becoming a multi-millionaire overnight is the one who utilized her imagination in the best possible manner. All painters have the knowledge that is required for mixing colors and creating designs on canvas, but the ones who have created a niche for themselves are the ones who have put their vivid imagination on canvas.
In a nutshell, Imagination is truly an important component of every field. Revolutionaries may even impute their greatest success to those pivotal moments when an idea seemingly jumps at them. But it is clear that knowledge is the foundation of their successes, without which there is no imagination. Our intellectual progress, and our individual socio-economic value hinges on knowledge. Thus, knowledge is all the more important than imagination in most professions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n becomes more important, to articulate an façade of mutual understanding. Whi...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ion comes, we pass on them what we have know, and perhaps unwittingly imagined. Cons...
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Line 10, column 620, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...t a break, and the one who has actually succeed in becoming a multi-millionaire overnig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, may, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, in fact, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3205.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23692810458 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16196795523 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 343.0 215.323595506 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56045751634 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 1010.7 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.3299912928 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.387096774 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7419354839 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910981025194 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249607123652 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399267616498 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500319625545 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392014101811 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 178.0 100.480337079 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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