In many countries its now illegal to smoke in public spaces. it's only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking nowadays has become very common habit between lots of people. However, plethora of countries have imposed some rules to mitigate such bad behavior in public places such like closed offices and buildings, so smokers have to leave such places into other allocated areas for smoking. In my point of view, I totally agree and this essay will discuss the dangerous effects of smoking in public places in further detail before coming to conclusion.
Firstly, with no doubt, smoking is very harmful practice for all individuals. For instance, smoking is the main cause of the sudden death, hypertension, and other heart diseases. Therefore, banning such extremely bad habit to be performed in public areas, will participate in minimizing it. Since the smokers feel, they are being more isolated and thats might motivated them to quit it. Secondly, since smoking in general is unhealthy behavior, it's one of the governments imperatives is to keep regular people away from such serious effects. To illustrate, it's irrefutable that passive smokers who are exposed to bad smokes, will be suffered from same illnesses that the regular smokers have. Thus, prohibition such detrimental habit will maintain other people health.
Thirdly, public areas are for all people, and smoking in any place will make it very dirty and messy. The smoking area in any airport as an example, is one of the most untidy place and has a bad smell. Therefore, all people have the right to work and stay in clean environment. Finally, smoking is the main source of extremely serious disaster. For example, the major reason of fires worldwide especially in forests is the cigarettes. Many careless people unfortunately, smoking in such places and causing a real catastrophe. Such fire indeed, costs communities lots of efforts as well as money in order to fighting it.
In conclusion, people have the full right to live in healthy environment away from any dangerous habit like smoking. Therefore, I strongly agree that smoking in public places should be totally blocked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21987951807 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78755418591 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4031713885 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2105263158 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.31578947368 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231149484585 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749155858093 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422107073703 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154510127662 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00932729352778 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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