the chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010. Global breakdown of energy consumption 2010
The chart shows the proportion or percentage used for the global energy consuming for the global breakdown in 2010.
The biggest source of power used was petroleum,it produced thirty nine percent.Then the natural gas and coal mining produced twenty two percent and twenty three percent. There were eight percent for nuclear electric power. Then the least source used was renewable it produced seven percent. Moreover,it consisted number of fuels. The biomass which consists wood and straw which was fifty three percent which was the largest renewable used. Then the hydroelectric renewable fuel which was second largest that was thirty six percent. Both the solar and geothermal was same which acquired five percent. Finally,the wind was the smallest renewable used which was one percent.
To sum up all, even though there is availability of renewable they consumed five percent. Where the highest source of power consumed for petroleum. But it is safer to use renewable as it is Eco-friendly than pollution causing sources like petroleum.
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