The tabular chart illustrates about the residents in six nations and the urban population was escalated in 2008. The data
has been represented in the percentage.
Overview, it is evident to clear that the highest population density in China and the fewer population density in Canada. However, urbanization rate was maximum in Canada and minimum in Uruguay nation.
Having a quick glance on the tabluar chart, the China's population rate was high rather than other nations it was 34,876km2 in 2008 and the India was second highest(23,980) population density in nation. Morever, the population rate sharply decreased by 10,600 in eEgypt. The 12,310 residents were belonged from Uruguary. Whereas, the most populace density from Canada and United state of America it was 2,000 and 5,500 respectively.
Probing ahead, the urbanization rate was below 100% in Canada and exactly 87% in USA. The Uruguay's rate was almost a quater (23%).Furthermore, it was increased by 14percent inEgypt. The population rate 43% in india and below two third in china.
- Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work ans should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008. 73
- The given diagram shows the natural water purification system 78
- The tables show the population density in 6 countries and the increasing rate of urban population in 2008. 61
- Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier .However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pulation was escalated in 2008. The data has been represented in the percentage. ...
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Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: MOST_POPULACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'most populous'?
Suggestion: most populous
...re belonged from Uruguary. Whereas, the most populace density from Canada and United state of...
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Line 8, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...e Uruguays rate was almost a quater 23%.Furthermore, it was increased by 14percent inEgypt....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, second, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29341317365 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84074784648 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8820112394 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336726600693 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129287482766 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912035317726 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184555145524 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998787668259 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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