more and more people are facing new disease due to moderan lige style and they are not satisfied with moderan medicine and looking back to words traditional medicien
All the money in the world cant buy you back good helth.the problems of people suffering from helth problem causee by a modren life style and they are not satisfy with modren medicien is an issue that has been brought up by many people in the past . i compleatly go with treditional medicen because natural treatment is the best way to help out from new diseases . let us analuze this topic
there arevvarious root causes that need to be taken into consideration , whem we talk about the problem of while in the time of modren treatment and using modern medicen , sudden change will occure in human body through that make you very eeak . where as in the case of traditional medicen ,there eipp be no side effects like weakness ,etc there also dicreased instance of problems such as rashes and skin disease.
Again tthere are numerous reasons why we ahould side with , the very populae belife that this topic present . to start with the most notable one stems from the fact that in some unique disease like cancer , fortunatly they are lot of medicen available in traditional way . th neutralizer abstract from the naturae, acts to our body , and it reacts comfortable you will not find any other helth issues while using traditional medicine
Taking into account of arguments disussed , we can conclude that to return to traditional medicen should be encorage .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83189655172 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4610203583 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663793103448 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7145871 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.142857143 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1428571429 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 1.69756097561 1473% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139840986186 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631167672555 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483214122294 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774125274878 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060968955213 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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