Dear Sir
I have recently heard about you shop from my friend as I required some houshold items to furnish my accommdation where I had not gotton any furnisher. Therefore, through this letter I just wanted to inquire about the furniture listed below,you have at your store.
First of all,I want a dining table for my home,for four people and also a television case as I have 21" television set.What else I need is, a cupboard with different locker for my necessary documents and more importantly for money. More interesting,I was fascinated about the prices you charge on these items this will be convenient for me to pay for it because I am student and cannot pay high street rates.
I would be grateful if you could please provide information for all these items mentioned avobe and also the alternative options.If you could provide me the pictures of all these furnishing items as I can hardly visit your place.In your reply send me the detals and the price of the demanded interiors keeping my status into consideration.
Hoping for an reply as early as possible because I have to decorate my house within this week.
Yours faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88324873096 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70139483918 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 16.3608247423 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8780002827 44.8134815571 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.333333333 76.5299724578 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.8333333333 16.8248392259 195% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 4.34317383033 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214829462819 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102335066935 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523591543656 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12859225064 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074673903875 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 8.37731958763 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 8.54432989691 173% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.