The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
It is irrefutable that the youngsters are more involved in law-breaking activities these days as a result, a significant number of individuals believe that guiding parents about parenting talent is the lone way to solve these problems. While it will help the society in controlling crime rates of teenagers as parents are more involved with their children, I am of the opinion that strictness in law and order is another way to minimize such cases.
On the one hand, harsh punishments should be necessary for all the people who are involved in the crime scene so that the crime rates can be controlled in young individuals. For instance, convincing youngsters is easy especially when they are drug-addicted consequently, the advantage of this behaviour is taken by many gangsters who involve young individuals to commit a crime for their personal benefits, therefore, strict law and order to control such things in the society are mandatory for the government.
On the other hand, parent involvement is quite crucial and essential in developing children, thus educating parents on parenting is a good idea to limit youngsters from criminal activities. Guardian is the closed contact of children during their upbringing and pupils learn most of the activity from them, hence it is important that parent should keep eye on their kid's activity so that they can guide them right paths time to time. Accordingly, improving parenting is an effective way of decreasing illegal activities of their offspring.
In conclusion, although, educating guardian can restrict children from wrongdoing activities, the powerful statute is also the way to control the society criminal activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... illegal activities of their offspring. In conclusion, although, educating guard...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29962546816 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97214551293 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558052434457 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.884318395 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.875 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.375 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1909085838 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932781225685 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493799362197 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107692069525 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606350182126 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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